High School Agents

Title: High School Agents

Link: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/Sheepoling1/

Author : Sheepoling

Review By: Nastasha

Title: 6/ 10

There’s a story in the past which shared same title as you. However, the title is still a bit boring.

Cast Used: 3/5

Common but still, I’m satisfied with the pairings.

Foreword: 4/10

Very brief descriptions. Although at the first few chapters, you did add it the bio data of the characters, but still there’s bit of confusion for some readers.

Poster & Background: 7/ 10

The poster was average only. Pictures on the poster do not match the casts’ identity or character. But the colour of the words is visible on the black background. It matches well and enables readers to continue reading despite long period of time.

Plot: 12/15

I like the way how it goes. Especially with the teasing and humor from Snow. And how the cool Chun plans his strategy against his father. Furthermore, the jealousy from Ariel is interesting too. Loves the double personality.

Originality & Creativity: 12/15

Although it’s not as creative as other stories I read, but this is considered a great feat. I got nothing much to criticize about it because different people have different style in writing.

Language (Spelling and Grammar): 6/ 10

So far so good. I have not spotted any spelling error at the moment. Probably you can improve the sentence structure. There is a few which is hard to understand.

Overall Enjoyment: 11/ 20

At the beginning, it was rather boring and draggy. However, after the next few chapters, it started to get better. But the excitement for the agent “mission” was kind of short.

Reader Friendly: 3/5

The bonding between readers and author is very average. Although there is a bit suspense in it, but still, at the beginning, the chapters were kind of confusing and boring.

Total: 64/100