Love Have no reasons

Love have no reasons
http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/forensia/
Written by: forest330
Reviewed by: imgnts

Title: 7/10
Well first off, the title of the story has some grammar mistakes. Secondly, since your story has just begun, the title may not seem to be relating to the story as much yet, so I gave you a 7 on it. But I’m sure you’ll be able to get to that as the story progresses on.

Cast Used: 5/5
I like how you used some real actors but also at the same time, had some fictional characters in it as well, it’s quite creative that way and you won’t be biased in a way since in a lot of stories I’ve reviewed, a lot of people tend to have cliché’s such as this person always goes with that person and “that person” is always the enemy of that person.. etc.

Foreword: 10/10
It was good the way you described a bit of the story, and what conflicts the main character might face but you just gave some examples, not ideas or revealing your story. I also like how you described each character briefly.

Poster & Background: --/10
You don’t really have a poster so I’ll deduct the mark from the total so it won’t be unfair to you. But you can always request a poster from our site’s awesome poster makers =)

Plot: 12/15
Your plot is really good, and I like the kind of plot you used, well at least I personally like these types of fictional stories. Also, I like the idea how you used fictional characters with real actors to make the story more interesting.

Originality & Creativity: 12/15
I like your plot but somehow, it seems like a bunch of Taiwanese dramas all bunched together, like a bit of this and a bit of that show. For example, the IQ idea reminds me of “It Started With A Kiss” and the way how it’s a smart girl going into a rich school reminds me of “Meteor Garden – Japanese Version” (that’s the only version I watched).

Spelling & Grammar: 9/10
Your title should be “Love has no reasons” instead of “Love have no reasons” since reasons is in plural form but other than that, good job on spelling as well as grammar, and it’s easier to use conversational methods for stories since it’s easier than writing in POVs or in paragraphs.

Overall Enjoyment: 15/20
After reading the first two chapters, I already like it :) It’s a nice story with a good plot, except that since it’s quite near the beginning, it might be even better when it hits the climax I’m sure, and then you’ll have tons of readers ! So keep the story going, I’m sure more readers will come :)

Reader Friendly: 0/5
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Total: 70/90

Bonus: 0/3 – Link back to us !