Office Politics

Title: Office Politics
Author: by xuwen
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/xuewen2
Reviewed by: Lamer_

Title = 10/10
Nice Title.. Lovely.. It does really suit your story theme.. The name is short and easy to remember, caught my attention when I first read it.. Great Job..

Cast = 5/5
Although you use Chun and Ella as your cast, Your story attracts me a lot with the unique and lovely ways of your writing.. A full marks for you..

Foreword = 10/10
A lovely foreword by you.. It credits whomever that it needs to be credited… And you explained the story will be written in unique ways of e-mail-ing, IMs, text message, blog post and etc.. And it’s a great ways of starting a new story.. So a full marks to you..

Poster & Background = 10/10
Lovely Poster and background used.. It suit the mood of the story.. The colour you use for the words doesn’t hurt the readers eye unlike some.. Great Job done..

Plot = 15/15
A full marks for you yet again.. It’s amazing.. I love the plot.. Superb.. The amazing vocabulary you use and those twist and turn really interest me till the end.. Great job done..

Originality & Creativity = 15 /15
Lovely storyline and Great casting.. I never know working can be so fun with playing e-mails, IM-ing, calls and etc.. It brighten up the whole dull life of working.. The excellent flow of the story and the fantastic vocabulary use brighten up the whole story.. Those twist and turn really take me on to a new level of enjoyment.. Great job done.. SO a lovely full marks for u again, You really deserve it.. Brilliant work..

Language (Spelling & Grammar) = 10/10
Another Full marks for you.. I can hardly spot any mistake.. Great job done.. Thumb up

Overall enjoyment = 20/20
Lovely story.. I really enjoy every minute reading it.. The brilliant storyline and excellent flow made my reading an enjoyable time.. The twist and turn in the story take me on and surprise me with unexpected result.. It’s a great experience reading your story.. Great Job done..

Reader Friendly = 5/5
The writer is very friendly and reply the readers.. Great job.. :)

Bonus Mark!
Link Back To Us: 0/3

Total: 100