Devious Love

Title: Devious Love

Author: by Kim Bunnie

URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/Bunnie/

Reviewed by: Lamer_

Title = 10/10

Lovely title.. It’s nice and catchy.. :)

Cast = 5/5

Lovely Cast used.. Nice one.. :)

Foreword = 5/10

Not much detail in it.. I suggest you add in a little paragraph of the story to enhance the whole story and interest the reader..

Poster & Background = 6/10

Nice poster used.. But the background is kind plain.. Marks cut off for the fonts of the story.. I have a real hard time reading the brown fonts letters with the background.. Avoid them as they crash.. I suggest you space the words out a little bit as some words cramp up and made it hard to read..

Plot = 12/15

The flow was great.. The plot is was great too.. It’s cool.. I love it.. Do add in a bit more emotions part to enhance the story..

Originality & Creativity = 13/15

Nice idea of yours.. It’s really original and creative.. Cool idea form.. Great job..

Language (Spelling & Grammar) = 8/10

Spot a few spelling mistake.. But overall it’s all right..

Overall enjoyment = 16/20

Well.. I enjoy it a lot at parts when it’s funny and good.. Lovely job done for it.. Continue the lovely job.. Do sent in for a detail review when you finish the story..

Reader Friendly = 3/5

The writer is very friendly and reply the readers.. Great job.. But please space out the words.. It’s hard to read when some words are cramp up together.. And take note of the color font of the story.. It crash with the background.. Mark off for the 2 reason..

Bonus Mark!
Link Back To Us: 0/3
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Total: 78

Additional Remark: Well.. Do remember to take note of the font color in the story.. Choose color which will not crash with the background.. Do sent in again for another round of detail review when you finish the story.. :)