Doppleganger

Title: Doppleganger

Author: by Ji Yul

URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/Twin_Ji_Yul/

Reviewed by: Lamer_

Title = 10/10

Nice Title.. Lovely.. It does really suit your story theme.. The name is short and easy to remember, caught my attention when I first read it.. Great Job..

Cast = 4/5

The Korean cast.. Well.. I hardly read those Korean cast story.. But the cast use in your story is not bad..

Foreword = 8.5/10

A lovely foreword by you.. It does tell the reader a little on what to expect for the story.. A rather interesting foreword.. Scary in some way..

Poster & Background = 9/10

Lovely Poster used.. It suit the mood of the story.. The colour you use for the words doesn’t hurt the readers eye unlike some.. Great Job done..

Plot = 13/15

The plot is finely write out.. The story flow was nice.. The scary part was great.. I love reading scary story.. So I will be waiting to see how it goes on for the scary part..

Originality & Creativity = 12.5 /15

The storyline was super.. :) The flow and the creative-ness enhance the story and made it rather interesting to read.. The originality help out pretty much.. Nice job..

Language (Spelling & Grammar) = 8.5/10

Not bad.. Only spot a few.. Overall it’s all right..

Overall enjoyment = 16.5/20

Lovely story.. I really enjoy reading it.. It is creepy and scary in some way.. I love to read scary story.. So thumb up for the scary parts.. The twist was great too.. Continue the good job.. I’m waiting to see how things go..

Reader Friendly = 5/5

The writer is very friendly and reply the readers.. Great job.. :)

Bonus Mark!
Link Back To Us: 0/3

Total: 87

Addition remark: I’ll be waiting to see how it will turn out.. The review will be better if it’s complete.. So do remember to sent in to review again when you have finish it.. :) Continue the good job.. :P