Fairytale Ending

Title: Fairytale Ending

Author: by 43vr_y0ur_g1rl_x3

URL: http://winglin.net/fanfic/fairytales_1/

Reviewed by: Lamer_

Title = 6.5/10

Nice Title.. Suit the mood of the story..

Cast = 4/5

Lovely casting.. I love it a lot..

Foreword = 6.5/10

Lovely start.. It does reveal a little of what will happen in the story.. Keep the reader interested of reading the story.. It also let us know why you choose the title for the story.. Nice one.. I feel you may need to add in a little more detail to spice up the foreword to be more interesting..

Poster & Background = 8/10

Lovely.. The colour suit the theme so much.. And the colour font of your story doesn’t hurt readers eyes..

Plot = 10.5/15

Your plot was pretty interesting.. The story flow was good.. But during some part, I find it a bit rush and bored.. Maybe you should add in more emotion for your character.. Those emotional part help to spice the story up..

Originality & Creativity = 10 /15

Your story is interesting but the originality isn’t too much in it.. Your story sound like those romance story around winglin but your creativeness help out a bit.. You should add in more emotions and romance part to spice up the whole story..

Language (Spelling & Grammar) = 8.5/10

Not bad.. Not much mistake.. Great job..

Overall enjoyment = 13.5/20

Well.. I did enjoy the story.. But some parts can be spice up by more emotional feeling from the character itself.. So do try to add in more emotional and romance in it..

Reader Friendly = 4/5

Nice interaction with the readers.. Clearing they love the story very much.. Good Job..

Bonus Mark!
Link Back To Us: 0/3

Total: 71.5