Saturday, December 22, 2007

"In love with the Chambermaid!"


Title: "In love with the Chambermaid!"

Author: by acupracacia

URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/inlovewithmycm/

Reviewed by: Lamer_

Title = 10/10

Lovely title.. It’s nice and catchy.. Very cute..

Cast = 5/5

Lovely Cast used.. I like them a lot.. EG and double is my favorite pairings..

Foreword = 10/10

Great foreword.. A much detail ones.. It attracts my interest in continuing reading on the story after reading the interesting foreword.. Great Job.. A full marks for you.. Cheers.. :)
Poster & Background = 10/10

Lovely Poster and background used.. It suit the mood of the story.. The colour you use for the words doesn’t hurt the readers eye unlike some.. Great Job done.. God.. I give you another full mark.. :)

Plot = 15/15
The flow was great.. The plot is was great too.. I totally adore your story so much.. The light-hearted way of writing it never fail to brighten up my day.. The funny parts always never fail to made me laugh.. Lovely story I can say.. Up till now, the last chapter you updated.. I am very hook on you story.. Another full marks for you again.. :)

Originality & Creativity = 15 /15

Great storyline and Great casting.. The idea was pretty creative and nice.. The originality was there.. I couldn’t help to praise your great sense of humor in the story.. Another full marks for you..

Language (Spelling & Grammar) = 10/10

Another full marks for you.. I can hardly spot any mistake.. Great job done.. Thumb up

Overall enjoyment = 20/20

I totally LOVE YOU STORY SO MUCH.. I enjoy every moment reading it.. It’s such a lovely things just to read your great story.. It always brighten up my day.. Great job.. :) Another full mark for you.. God.. I’m giving you full mark for all *smack my head* Can't help it.. Your story are just too good.. :)

Reader Friendly = 4/5

The writer is very friendly and reply the readers.. Great job.. But please space out the words.. It’s hard to read when some words are cramp up together.. :(

Bonus Mark!
Link Back To Us: 0/3
Remember to link us back.. :)

Total: 99

Additional Remark: Well.. I totally adore your story so much.. PLEASE UPDATE SOON okies?? :) I’m waiting.. :) Do sent in again for another round of detail review when you are finish with the story okies?? :) Cheers.. :P

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