The J Sign

Title: The J Sign
Author: CaDDiE
URL: www.winglin.net/fanfic/theJsign
Review By: Lovie
Title: 10/ 10

Cool. I must really say that this title of yours is special and attractive. Practically, it is amazing. And, I can understand why it is “The J Sign”. It is because of the keychain, right? =]

Cast Used: 5/5

From the character introduction, I suppose this is a Boy’s Love story. I think this is the first time I have read story on the three of them. Interesting! :D

Foreword: 7/10

I like this foreword, with the detailed character introduction. However, something seems to be missing. In my opinion, I think that you should include a short summary of the story, or even a short prologue. That will interest the readers more; keeping them in suspense and making them want to read more. Is that alright? =)

Poster & Background: 4/ 10

I would award you 4 marks for the background. Somehow, I think it really suit your story because it gives me a mysterious feeling, especially when I’m keep in suspense what will happen next. However, I have little suggestion for you. Perhaps, you can request for a poster. With a poster, and even a background, they can spice up your webpage! It will certainly look nicer. Here’s the suggestion, hope you will accept it! =D

Plot: 12/15

Your story flow is smooth. So far, I like how you organize your ideas. Good! :)

Originality & Creativity: 12/15

For this criterion, I would judge based on the first two chapters, alright? So far, I think I like the idea of key chain. Very original and interesting. :D
Language (Spelling and Grammar): 10/ 10

Wow. I have not spotted any spelling or grammar mistake so far! Good job! Remember to keep it up! =D

Overall Enjoyment: 15/ 20

I would like to make a little comment. I find the first chapter a little confusing because you did not include the names of the characters of the story. I understand that you are trying to keep the readers in suspense, but if there are two people, keep to “younger” and “older”. If not, readers may misunderstand “other” as a third person in the car. It may be a bit confusing. However, in overall, I enjoyed the story because it is interesting. Hehes. :D

Reader Friendly: 0/5

Oops. Sorry, I can’t give you a good grade for this criterion because the bonding between the author and the readers is really negligible. Remember to reply to your readers’ comments! They should give more comments when their comments are appreciated!!! Is that alright? =)

Link back to Us: 0/3

Remember to link Midnight Tree next time! www.midnight-tree.co.nr
Thank you very much! =]

Total: 75

Additional Remark: Hello CaDDiE! Thank you for requesting a review from Midnight Tree. I have to say that your fanfic is a good one. I know and I can see that you have put in a lot of efforts. However, I think that the marks may not be fair to you because you have not completed your fanfic yet. So, I would strongly recommend you to request another review from us again after you have completed the fanfic. In that way, it would be fairer to you. Again, I have to say, good luck with your fanfic and remember to keep up the good work! All the best. :DD