Say I Love You...Cause I Do!

Title: Say I Love You...Cause I Do!

Author: by Yvonne,'drmyslamyi`&Valerie

URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/Yvonne/

Reviewed by: Lamer_

Title = 9.5/10

Nice Title.. Suit the mood of the story.. But it’s a bit long..

Cast = 4/5

Lovely casting.. I love it a lot..

Foreword = 9.5/10

Lovely start.. It does reveal a little of what will happen in the story.. Keep the reader interested of reading the story.. Nice one..

Poster & Background = 10/10

Lovely.. The colour suit the theme so much.. And the colour font of your story doesn’t hurt readers eyes..

Plot = 13.5/15

Your plot was pretty interesting.. The story flow was good.. But during some part, I find it a bit rush.. Maybe you should add in more emotion for your character.. Those emotional part help to spice the story up..

Originality & Creativity = 13.5 /15

Your story is interesting and your originality play a big part in it.. Your story sound like those romance story around winglin but your creativeness help out a lot.. You should add in more emotions and romance part to spice up the whole story..

Language (Spelling & Grammar) = 10/10

Great.. No mistake found.. Good job..

Overall enjoyment = 18.5/20

Well.. I did enjoy the story.. But some parts can be spice up by more emotional feeling from the character itself.. So do try to add in more emotional and romance in it..

Reader Friendly = 3.5/5

Nice interaction with the readers.. Clearing they love the story very much.. Good Job.. But some of your words are hard to read because they are stick together..

Bonus Mark!
Link Back To Us: 0/3

Total: 92