Scattered in the Wind

Title: Scattered in the Wind

URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/jishin4/

Written by: JiShin

Reviewed by: imgnts

Title: 10/10
It’s a really nice title, very meaningful, and I like how you related it back to the first time when YooChun met JunSu, there was a gust of wind…and at the concert,

Cast Used: 5/5
The characters you used were not too many, only two, so it was easy to understand especially for people who don’t really know Korean stars that much like me =P

Foreword: 8/10
I liked the forwards, it’s really deep in a way and makes in interesting. But one thing you might want to do is list the characters because I was pretty confused about who was in the story in the beginning when I read the first chapter, especially when I wasn’t really sure who was the one telling the story.

Poster & Background: 8/10
The background looks really nice, I like how it’s all stretched out the whole window =) love that effect. Did you have a poster though? Because I didn’t see a poster =\

Plot: 13/15
Your plot was well organized and interesting, but one thing I wanted to mention is that in the very beginning, I was really confused at who was telling the story, which I found out later on in the second chapter or so, so maybe next time in the forwards, you can mention who’s telling the story?

Originality & Creativity: 15/15
I have not really read any of these types of fics before, so this is a first time, but it’s really interesting. I like how you presented the story

Spelling & Grammar: 10/10
Your grammar and spelling is really good and you used a wide range of vocabs as well.

Overall Enjoyment: 17/20
Like I said, I’m not really a big fan of reading this type of fics, but there’s always a first time, and I do like this, but the ending is so sad, he just had to die…and he didn’t get to see him once before he died…even though he came to his concert.

Reader Friendly: 5/5
It’s good that you reply to reader’s comments and talk to them sometimes, like say thank you for leaving comments because it’s a way of showing readers that you appreciate their comments and that you do read them =)

Total: 91/100
Bonus: 0/3 – link back to us for bonus!