Yunho, the (Unwilling) Wish Granter!

Title:Yunho, the (Unwilling) Wish Granter!

URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/filaphiera3/

Written by: Filaphiera

Reviewed by: imgnts

Title: 10/10
I can totally see how you came up with this title after reading the first two chapters, it’s really funny and cute. I’m guessing he doesn’t even know that he’s a wish granter yet? It’s really funny how you came up with all these ideas of what he turns into xD but yeah, it’s a unique title too, so good job on that =D

Cast Used: 4/5
I think it’s creative that you used different characters every time but those are all minors and your main character is Yunho.

Foreword: 8/10
Hmm, your foreword is a really mysterious… especially in the beginning where there is a “figure” - who is that? I have no idea… I tried to guess and tried my best haha anyways, besides that maybe you might want a little bit of introduction to your story in your foreword? Like I know that you put in the introduction of the story, but what I mean is like for example, show a bit of your plot maybe?

Poster & Background: --/10
I will deduct marks from this section of the review because you don’t have a background or a poster. You can always request one from our awesome designers at midnight-tree =)

Plot: 12/15
I’m not really sure about your plot, I just know that Yunho has this stud on his ear which makes him a wish-granter and he has to do it, and he’s still clueless about it. And who is the person who puts the earring on him? Is it someone that hates him? lol, I was trying to figure that out XD Anyways, besides that, i’m not really sure what would happen to the ending… so basically, your plot is the unpredictable kind in a way, which isn’t a bad thing, it might even make it more interesting for the readers ;)

Originality & Creativity: 15/15
I’ve got to give you full marks on this one ;) This is one of a kind story…I’ve never seen a story this interesting before. Every time before he is in danger, there is someone else that makes a wish about him and saves him, of course phew~ haha, and yeah, it’s really interesting… I’m so jealous of him, he even gets to travel around the world that way too XD except… not in a fun way haha

Spelling & Grammar: 10/10
I like how you used some point of views and some speeches from characters, it’s a good way to present a story =)

Overall Enjoyment: 17/20
I’ve got to say, this is quite an interesting story, I do enjoy reading it indeed, but somehow, it’s just a bit awkward haha, I feel sorry for Yunho sometimes… from turning into a sushi to a cat and maybe to a girl next! Gosh, I can’t even imagine it xD And I love how you expressed the part where he fell into the soy sauce and felt shiver up his spine and or rice, that was really cute.

Reader Friendly: 5/5
You’ve responded or at least talked to readers in your comment page, which maintains a good relationship between readers and authors =)

Bonus: 0/3 – Link back to us for bonus!

Total: 81/90

Note: Good job on your story & keep it going =)