The Big House of Bang

The Big House of Bang
http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/Kim_Bunnie/
Written by: Kim Bunnie
Reviewed by: imgnts



Title: 10/10
I like how you included “Big Bang” in your title and your main casts is Big Bang. And the title relates to your story really obviously, since it’s about Jae Rin living in the house which Big Bang lives in.

Cast Used: 4/5
I like how you used a popular group or in this case, band, of people so that most people would know and that might increase your number of readers, and yeah. But them one problem I had throughout the story – well in the first few chapters at least, was the casts and their nicknames. I wasn’t sure if you used their names or their nicknames but then I got it after the prologue part so it was okay.

Foreword: 9/10
Your forewords is well presented, it gives a brief description of everyone so good job on that :] And you kind of gave a prologue of the story before you started on the actual story, I think it’s pretty unique that way. I realized that after the last prologue chapter XD but good job, except it was a bit confusing at first, because in your forewords, I didn’t really know if Jae Joong was a member of Big Bang or not.

Poster & Background: 10/10
Nice poster! Quite suitable for the story, but just one question I’ve been wondering – if the girl is fictional, who’s the girl in the poster, is it just some random girl?

Plot: 15/15
Your plot was well presented and everything was step by step in a steady pace. Everything seemed to be very coincidental, from Jae Rin bumping into three of the members the night before to her tripping over Seung Ri and then ending up living in the same house as them!

Originality & Creativity: 12/15
I think your story was lacking some originality in a way but I’m not saying your story is bad, I really liked your story and it is really creative, but from reading previous stories, I’ve sort of read this type of story before, like famous boy or band meeting ordinary girl not knowing them…etc, you get my flow? But nevertheless you had your own creative thought and that’s what counts!

Spelling & Grammar: 9/10
No major spelling or grammar mistakes, except I think when you write “Upz” you mean “oops” right? You sometimes use some words which I’m not sure if its slang or just the words in Korean like “un” and “aa”.

Overall Enjoyment: 18/20
I really enjoyed reading the story despite the small confusions in the beginning I had because of my lack of knowledge about Big Bang…makes me feel like Jae Rin in a way haha XD joking, but anyways, I really do enjoy reading the story and your plot was good, definitely a good read, hope the best to your and more readers would come read your story!

Reader Friendly: 5/5
You’ve replied to your readers’ comments and answer questions and sort of talk to them in a way, which is good. Also, you make some author’s note sometimes and let them know if you are unable to update for a bit or not, which is building a sort of friendship with your readers, good job!

Total: 92/100
Bonus: 0/3 – Link back to us for bonus!