Title: 纯 Pure innocence 洁
Author: by Sheepoling
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/Sheepoling3/
Reviewed by: Lamer_
Title = 9/10
Well.. It was a Challenge title.. So I won’t comment too much on it.. But it’s nice and catchy.. :)
Cast = 5/5
Lovely Cast used.. Nice one.. :)
Foreword = 9/10
Interesting Foreword.. The little paragraph at the foreword grab my attention.. It interest me to read on to know more about the story.. Maybe you can add in a little character intro into it, to made the reader know a little more.. :)
Poster & Background = 10/10
Nice poster used.. Lovely.. I love it so much.. The fonts of the story are all easy to read and doesn’t hurt the reader eyes.. :)
Plot = 13.5/15
The flow was great.. The plot is was great too.. It’s cool.. I love it.. Do add in a bit more emotions part to enhance the story.. The short yet sweet part of show of Selina is what I love them most..
Originality & Creativity = 13.5/15
Nice idea of yours.. It’s really that kind of style which I really love.. It clearly have lots of your cool personal style writing which enhance the story more.. :)
Language (Spelling & Grammar) = 8.5/10
Spot a few spelling mistake.. But overall it’s all right..
Overall enjoyment = 18.5/20
I love how the story goes.. The double side of Hebe.. The unknown tale of Ella sad past.. The innocent Selina.. Every moment made me enjoy so much.. The ending was sad yet good.. :)
Reader Friendly = 5/5
The writer is very friendly and reply the readers.. Great job.. The fonts are easy to read.. Nice job.. :)
Bonus Mark!
Link Back To Us: 0/3
Remember to link us back.. :)
Total: 92
Author: by Sheepoling
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/Sheepoling3/
Reviewed by: Lamer_
Title = 9/10
Well.. It was a Challenge title.. So I won’t comment too much on it.. But it’s nice and catchy.. :)
Cast = 5/5
Lovely Cast used.. Nice one.. :)
Foreword = 9/10
Interesting Foreword.. The little paragraph at the foreword grab my attention.. It interest me to read on to know more about the story.. Maybe you can add in a little character intro into it, to made the reader know a little more.. :)
Poster & Background = 10/10
Nice poster used.. Lovely.. I love it so much.. The fonts of the story are all easy to read and doesn’t hurt the reader eyes.. :)
Plot = 13.5/15
The flow was great.. The plot is was great too.. It’s cool.. I love it.. Do add in a bit more emotions part to enhance the story.. The short yet sweet part of show of Selina is what I love them most..
Originality & Creativity = 13.5/15
Nice idea of yours.. It’s really that kind of style which I really love.. It clearly have lots of your cool personal style writing which enhance the story more.. :)
Language (Spelling & Grammar) = 8.5/10
Spot a few spelling mistake.. But overall it’s all right..
Overall enjoyment = 18.5/20
I love how the story goes.. The double side of Hebe.. The unknown tale of Ella sad past.. The innocent Selina.. Every moment made me enjoy so much.. The ending was sad yet good.. :)
Reader Friendly = 5/5
The writer is very friendly and reply the readers.. Great job.. The fonts are easy to read.. Nice job.. :)
Bonus Mark!
Link Back To Us: 0/3
Remember to link us back.. :)
Total: 92
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