Title: Doppelganger
Author: by Ji Yul
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/Twin_Ji_Yul
Reviewed by: Lamer_
Title = 9.5/10
Lovely Title.. It attracts my attention when I first see it.. Unique in it own way..
Poster & Background = 9.5/10
Nice poster.. It suit the theme and genre of the story very much.. :)
Foreword = 8/10
Well.. You start off with a start paragraph of the story which interest me to read on.. But you didn’t have any character intro to let the reader know more about the cast.. Maybe next time you can add in a little intro first to kick off for the foreword..
Cast = 4/5
I have no much comment about the casting.. Just love how you shape up the character in the story
Originality & Creativity = 13 /15
Interesting storyline.. Lovely flow of the story.. Nice job.. Although it tend to be a confusing at times, but overall I love your idea of those mystery and horror part in the story.. The creativity-ness help out a bit in the story.. Maybe you can try to let your imagination runs wilder for more horror or mystery part.. Just a penny of my thoughts.. :)
Plot = 14/15Great.. I love how the story flow till it ends.. But it’s weird in certain chapter but I do enjoy very much the weird yet interesting story you wrote.. :)
Language (Spelling & Grammar) = 9/10
Not bad.. Hardly found any.. Only some small ones.. But overall it’s good.. :)
Flow Of The Story: 8/10
The story flow was amazing.. I like how it’s written and I totally adore it.. But I tend to lost in some part Jaejoong become confused about stuff and etc.. But my doubts and confusion are all clear up after finish reading all.. Good job.. :)
Writing Style: 4.5/5
I adore your writing style.. It’s uniquely yours way.. I like how you shape up each and every character of the story and the way you twist and turn the story..
Overall enjoyment = 9/10
I really did enjoy the story.. It’s lovely and nice.. I totally love your writing style.. All the best for you future story..
Bonus Mark: 4/5
I can see your effort in writing good chapter out in the story.. Keep up the good work..
Total: 92.5Additional Comment: I really love your writing style and your story very much.. Unique and lovely in it’s own way.. :)
Reviewed By Lamer_@Midnight-tree.co.nr
Author: by Ji Yul
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/Twin_Ji_Yul
Reviewed by: Lamer_
Title = 9.5/10
Lovely Title.. It attracts my attention when I first see it.. Unique in it own way..
Poster & Background = 9.5/10
Nice poster.. It suit the theme and genre of the story very much.. :)
Foreword = 8/10
Well.. You start off with a start paragraph of the story which interest me to read on.. But you didn’t have any character intro to let the reader know more about the cast.. Maybe next time you can add in a little intro first to kick off for the foreword..
Cast = 4/5
I have no much comment about the casting.. Just love how you shape up the character in the story
Originality & Creativity = 13 /15
Interesting storyline.. Lovely flow of the story.. Nice job.. Although it tend to be a confusing at times, but overall I love your idea of those mystery and horror part in the story.. The creativity-ness help out a bit in the story.. Maybe you can try to let your imagination runs wilder for more horror or mystery part.. Just a penny of my thoughts.. :)
Plot = 14/15Great.. I love how the story flow till it ends.. But it’s weird in certain chapter but I do enjoy very much the weird yet interesting story you wrote.. :)
Language (Spelling & Grammar) = 9/10
Not bad.. Hardly found any.. Only some small ones.. But overall it’s good.. :)
Flow Of The Story: 8/10
The story flow was amazing.. I like how it’s written and I totally adore it.. But I tend to lost in some part Jaejoong become confused about stuff and etc.. But my doubts and confusion are all clear up after finish reading all.. Good job.. :)
Writing Style: 4.5/5
I adore your writing style.. It’s uniquely yours way.. I like how you shape up each and every character of the story and the way you twist and turn the story..
Overall enjoyment = 9/10
I really did enjoy the story.. It’s lovely and nice.. I totally love your writing style.. All the best for you future story..
Bonus Mark: 4/5
I can see your effort in writing good chapter out in the story.. Keep up the good work..
Total: 92.5Additional Comment: I really love your writing style and your story very much.. Unique and lovely in it’s own way.. :)
Reviewed By Lamer_@Midnight-tree.co.nr
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