Go on... And I will meet you half-way there.

Title: Go on... And I will meet you half-way there.
Author: Keleos
URL: www.winglin.net/fanfic/keleos2
Reviewed By: Lovie

Title: 9/10

Upon first impression, I was wondering why would it be half-way. =P It didn’t really manage to catch my eye because it looks plain.

After I have read the story, I understood. Sweet title, really sweet. It touches my heart.

Poster & Background: 9.5/10

This poster really suits this fanfic. It gives me a sweet feeling. However, it seems to lack of a little melancholic feeling. Just a little, it would have been perfect. :)

Foreword: 7.5/10

I was expecting some… climax…? Personally(yes, only me. I’m a weirdo. Pardon me.), I would prefer a bombshell in the forewords. It will catch my attention straight away. Though there is no bombshell here, but I still like it. Short and sweet. Nice forewords. Especially the last sentence, “Thank God. Because I found you.” It was sweet. Perhaps, you could add a little prologue to add in some suspense here. =)

Cast Used: 4.5/5

I really like this pair! Lee hom and Hebe! Cute pair! =)

Originality & Creativity: 10/15

This is quite a typical storyline. An superstar falling in love with fangirl. 8 marks for that. The other 2 marks goes to some unexpected that surprises me. I did not, and will never expect Lee Hom marry Hebe in a wheelchair. That was really sweet. :D

Story & Plotting: 12/15

Sweet. =)

I like how you organize and plot your ideas using the interchange of scenes.

Spelling/Grammer/Vocabulary: 8/10

I did not spot any grammer mistakes. For spelling mistake, there are quite a few that can be over-looked. In overall, it was good job done. Keep it up, girl! =D

Flow Of Story: 7/10

I have no choice but to take away some points from this criterion because I felt a little uncomfortable how you write “two days later” etc. I felt that something was missing and I couldn’t really state what it is. The blanks in between just made me felt uneasy. I thought it would be better if you could include the setting of the story in the story. For example, “It has been two days…”

Writing Style: 4/5

You have a nice style of writing. However, it is not outstanding enough.

Nevertheless, I was impressed by how you managed to evoke emotions in the readers without the use of super profound words, but simple words. Also, at the end of each scene, I like how you end it shortly. For example, “Hey.” They have succeeded in keeping me in suspense. =]

Overall Enjoyment: 7.5/10

This is nice; however it is not outstanding enough. It just… lacks of some climaxes. I thought it would be better if you could describe some little climaxes, for example the scene when they are married. :)

Like what I have mentioned earlier, I felt a little uncomfortable about the flow of the story.

In addition, there are some parts which I thought them to be too long. Some paragraphs are so long that I felt lost in them. Perhaps, you can write shorter paragraphs, preferably 2-3 sentences. :]

Other than that, I have to say that I really enjoyed your fanfic. Simple, yet sweet. I could not forget how it manages to give me a slight melancholic without overdosing. Good job! :D

Bonus marks: 3/5

I could help but say again, sweet fanfic. Somehow, it managed to fascinate me with that sweet feeling hidden in the melancholic feeling. *winks* =D

Total mark: 82/100

Additional comments: Hellos, girl! It was really nice of you to request from me. I felt kinda honoured. (But, you trying to spam me! XD) Hahas, joking. Yeah, so I hope you will like the review since this is the first time I’m reviewing for such a professional writer. XD Hope to see you around again! Love your fanfics! :D

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Reviewed by(Lovie)@midnight-tree.co.nr