Her Gay Best Friend and the Rest of Her Life

Title: Her Gay Best Friend and the Rest of Her Life

Author: by per-per

URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/perper3/

Reviewed by: Lamer_

Title = 8.5/10

That was a interesting an bold title to use.. :) It's really eye-catching and cute in some way.. I love how it's connected to the story.. Great Job.. :)

Poster & Background = 7/10

I totally adore the poster.. :) It's so sweet and nice.. However, I feel the background doesn't really match with the poster.. The background is kinda of dark and moody.. Not the kind of theme i am see-ing the story is going.. :)

Foreword = 8/10

1 word.. Brilliant.. I really love how you start the foreword with the Prologue.. It was a real detail of how the story was going to go.. I really like how you describe Ella life in it and i was really absorb by them.. It made me wanted to read on what happen next and wanting to read on.. Great Job.. Maybe you can add in a short cast intro to made the foreword more interesting.. :) Just a penny of my though, No offence.. :)

Cast = 5/5

No much comment on the cast.. :) Great pairing.. Brilliant characterizations.. I can really see the effort put in to shaping up the characters.. Good effort.. :)

Originality & Creativity = 13/15

I totally love the idea of your story.. It's not like the same old romance story out in winglin.. The comedy part made the story better.. It's very original and creative in the story.. I was totally amused by those comedy part and they are all so creative.. :) Geat job.. The twist of Wu Chun is a gay is not a surprise yet, i love how you twist it to be a lie.. Totally un-expected (for me, i realy gonna believe Wu Chun is a gay) yet interesting.. I believe the story can go better if you have more emotional parts of Ella and Wu Chun added.. Just a penny of my thought, No offence.. :)

Plot = 13/15

I totally love you story plot.. Interesting, funny, entertaining.. I like how you link up the title and the story plot.. It was a totally re-freshing kind of romance story i had seem since i start my reviewing story.. It was pretty unique, and the comedy adds on made the story completely brilliant.. I believe with more twistes here and there, and adding more emotional aspect for the character, the story can get to a greater height.. :) All the best then.. :)

Language (Spelling & Grammar) = 9/10

Not much problem for this.. Just maybe a few small and littles ones.. But overall, It's fine.. :) Good Job.. :P

Flow Of The Story: 9/10

I'm very comfortable with the flow.. It's smooth and clear.. Flow well when everything is added up.. :) No much problem for this part.. Continue the good job.. The speed was just right.. Making everyone interested to read on with the right tempo.. :)

Writing Style: 4/5

Fine.. :) I totally love your story.. :) I may sound a little bias.. :) But, truthlly speaking.. It's brilliant.. :) The style was clear and easy to follow.. I have no much problem reading and enjoying the great story.. That's good.. Keep up the good job.. :)

Overall enjoyment = 9.5/10

I totally enjoy every little momen reading the story.. :) The comdey part made me have a good laugh here and there.. Everything in it was so cute and lovely.. :) I love the interaction of Ella with the 3 guys.. It was pretty well written out.. I was hoping to see more interesting interaction between Ella and the 3 guys.. All the best.. :)

Bonus Mark: 4/5

2 for the effort replying the readers, 1 for the wonderful story, 1 for the comdey part give me some good laugh.. :)

Total: 90

Additional Comment:

OK, i mention again and again, I totally love the story.. :) The comdey part made me have a good laugh and the interaction between the characters are well written.. :) As mention, i do hope to see more of that interaction out in the story in the later part when you continue writting.. Do remember to add in more twistes and emotional aspect for the character like what i mention to made the story more better.. :) Just a penny of my thoughts, so no offences.. :)

Reviewed By Lamer_@Midnight-tree.co.nr