(A) (tale) (that) (NEVER) (ends)

Warning: Very bad review ahead. Approach with caution.

Title: (A) (tale) (that) (NEVER) (ends)
Author: y.e.a.
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/once_upon/
Reviewed By: Keleos

First Impressions
Title: 2/10
First impression: have I come to the wrong place? Is this MSN messenger?

Seriously, what’s with all the brackets? And what’s with the emphasis on the NEVER? You know, the latter question is that one that really gets me, because I haven’t really found an answer to it. I can understand what it means to beautify the title and stuff, but what IS it with the emphasis on ‘never’? It gets me worried, because after the first chapter, I was convinced that it would really NEVER end. NEVER.

The title also set off a series of chain reactions in my brain, going something along the lines of a Lambchop classic. Which honestly, all I want is to turn you into lambchop after this whole reaction began. If you aren’t sure what I’m talking about, there’s always good, ‘ole Youtube.

And as you have already found out for yourself, this is (a) (review) (you) (hoped) (you) (had) (NEVER) (requested).

Poster and Background: 6/10
Points for a poster that’s well done, but unfortunately the colour of the background gets me. If a lighter shade were to be used, then the effect might have been better. This current one makes the poster stand out like a torch light in a dark room, which really, isn’t really the effect I think you might have wanted to achieve.

The font colours come upon as jarring on the eyes, and I had to turn down the brightness on both computer monitors in order to read comfortably.

Try to remember. You’re trying to make an impression by your story and your language, not the fact that your fic is a well known light bulb.

Foreword: 0/10
I have no qualms about giving 0 for this section simply because I think you deserve it. I’m being nice here, lumping both official and unofficial forewords (that’s how it’s spelt: foreword, foreword, foreword. Forward is the direction you should be going.) To put this all simply, let’s use a script form that you’re so fond of.

Mistake 1: Telling the readers that this fic might be boring. *Attention span wavers slightly*

Mistake 2: Having this TVB-esque beginning in your so-called official foreword, which really, made me switch off by the time I got midway of this… Thing. The word for it is shapeless. Another word for it would be… Irrelevant. Or overly dramatic. To the point that it’s become hair-raising.

In short, it’s just nonsense. *switches off*

Mistake three: You introduction of characters is really a classic case of what should be done to allow readers to tune out before they hit the main plot. Your plot might be the most intricate, wonderful plot in the universe, but with this sort of character introduction, it becomes nothing short of the very definition of “terrible”.

Mistake four: Writing an ancient piece in English a la the Forbidden Kingdom (a.k.a. the Jackie Chan show off vehicle).

Mistake five: It’s just funny. Very funny. Hilarious. And that’s only good if this was meant to be a comedy.

Upon closer examination…
Cast Used: 2/5
I applaud your interesting use of the cast. I also applaud your bravery in using an original character. I applaud your bravery in constructing such… memorable characters.

I’m being nice.

Or am I?

I mean, look, seriously. Who are these people? What are they doing? I see nothing but blank empty characters flying around, making clowns of themselves most of the time. I know that much of the inspiration comes from idol dramas and the like (and this one being especially reminiscent of a TVB serial), but this is writing. We don’t see the characters appear before us physically, and that cuts the drama and the caricature that they were supposed to be.

So sweetheart, write. Don’t draw. This is writing, you can’t draw with words as scant as yours, much less create convincingly human characters. You’re looking for characters, not clowns.

Story and Plotting: 2/15
Two. Let me explain.

Numero Uno. I don’t know what’s going on most of the time. And I know it’s not because I’m dumb. I’m not dumb; you’re confusing.

Duo. The plot moves so sllooooowlllyyy that I feel like I’m really reading a never ending tale. NEVER ending (emphasis not mine).

Tres. I applaud your use of translations, especially with the wonderfully, specific and accurate English translations of what is supposedly Chinese martial art strokes. The thing is, as I’ve said many times before, language is a form of communication, and I really don’t know what’s the point of using “SILVER FIST” when you can write something considerably more vivid a la “Jiro threw a punch at his attacker.” Or simply, in classic script style – Jiro: *punches hard*
Attacker: *nose bleeds*
Me: *sigh*

Language: Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 1/10
Let me recount to you how you lost the marks. Mark by mark.

At 10, your sticky caps on the contents page for the chapter titles got me. And then there were 8.
At 8, your excellent, but otherwise really useless and ineffective translations of certain martial art strokes that have long gone missing got me. And then there were 7.
At 7, your colloquial language like “yah” and “his self” (it should be himself) got me. And then there were 5.
At 5, your bad grammar like your mixing of past and present tenses got me. And then there were 4.
At 4, your overdose of CAPITAL LETTERS really, really got me. And then there were 2.
At 2, your use of diction put together (that means, incoherent sentences, unnecessary words, etc.) got me. And then there was 1.

Notice how the math flows? Not well? Hmmm… Oh well, I didn’t say I could do math, the same way as you didn’t say you could do English.

Flow of Story: 3/10
It doesn’t flow well. It flows too slowly, and I wish I could’ve ended it in a jiffy. And when anything is in script form, it just doesn’t flow, at all.

Look at it this way. It’s not the water over rocks that matters, because when water flows over rocks, it still maintains its fluidity. But when sand flows over rocks… It doesn’t flow. It gets stuck, and it becomes more rock over the years.

Your fic wasn’t water, neither was it fine sand. It was solidified rock.

Writing Style: 2.5/5
Not too bad, at least you were consistent, although it wasn’t consistently good.

I really advise against the whole script form thing. Really.

Overall feel…
Originality & Creativity: 3/15
I rolled a die and ended up at 3.

To you, that might spell how unprofessional, how insincere I am at writing this review, but to me, it doesn’t make a difference. Anything below 6 would’ve done the trick.

I’ve seen this plot somewhere, but if you had managed to work it well, then I wouldn’t have been so prissy about the whole clichéd or not thing. Problem is, you didn’t.

Creativity comes in two parts: plot, and style. If you weren’t creative on your plot, having pulled it from some Charmaine Sheh TVB drama, or some Nicholas Sparks novel out there, then you have to work on your style. But you weren’t even relatively coherent, not to mention if you could work out something to bring out the essence of what you were trying to bring out.

Plot: TVB drama.
Style: Taiwanese idol drama’s comedy mixed with sappiness.
Overall: Rubbish.

And notice, none of that is even original.

Overall Enjoyment: 0/10
I read maybe… 3 chapters of the lot? Or rather, I read every chapter, but I could have written the whole story within 3 chapters. Everything was wrong about this. Everything.

And by the way, you said it’s written in script form because it’s “ancient times”? I see no logic in that. Explain to me, please. I think it was more due to laziness than anything. And if you doubt that a period drama could be done in prose, then read more Louis Cha. It’s Chinese, but then again, you might fare better in another language other than English.

Bonus marks: 1/5
Responding to readers: 1
Linking to MT: 0
X-factor: 0

Total mark: 22.5/100

Additional Comments: I warned that I was strict, and sarcastic. And I offend, yes. It might be intentional, or otherwise, but why care? If this is the wake up call necessary for you to write better fics, then please, wake up already. Lambchop’s calling.

If not, I really (don’t) (EVER) (want) (to) (review) (your) (fics) (anymore).

Reviewed by Keleos@midnight-tree.co.nr

To Love and To Cherish

Title: To Love and To Cherish

Author: JiShin

URL: www.winglin.net/fanfic/jishin8

Reviewed By: Lovie

Title: 6.5/10

The title is sweet. However, it’s such a pity it lacks of an element of surprise, failing to interest me. To be frank, I don’t think it will be able catch my attention while I’m scrolling down the Winglin webpage, except for the fact your story is featuring TVXQ. This is an okay title for your story, but definitely not the best, if you want to interest more readers.

Poster & Background: 7/10

This poster is considered nice, for an author who does not design for her profession. I’m not a professional designer either, but what I can offer is feedbacks from a reader’s point of view. Overall, I do like the texts, the colour, the mood and all; however, I do not like your pictures. The quality of the pictures is low, causing the poster to look blur. It’s such a pity.
I have always encouraged authors to do their posters if they have the Photoshop software. I hope you can continue to keep up the good work.

Foreword: 2/10

You would have scored 0 marks for the fact you did not include a prologue of any sort, but I decided to give you 1 mark, for the fact that you managed to interest me with the mention of your casts.
It would be better if you could include a small introduction. Yes, it is hard because your story consist a collection of one-shots. Another 1 mark goes to the fact that you have an advantage less than other authors, whose stories are one-shots. Preferably, you can do a small prologue on for example, “Love”, and interest readers to read on to find out how TVXQ is going to explore “Love”.

Cast Used: 5/5

I’m definitely anticipating, because I’m a huge fan of TVXQ. =)
Taking into account that you story is one-shot, thus at disadvantage, being unable to give stronger characterisation, I think you have already done an excellent job on the characterisation of the protagonists.

Originality & Creativity: 10/15

No doubt, there are many elements of surprises here and there, especially Narcissus, which I find them intriguing. I’m really glad that you dare to challenge bold ideas.
Good job. Continue to keep it up.

Story & Plotting: 13/15

Taking into account that all the one-shots were given a limited space for plot development, thus I concluded that you have really done an excellent job for each and every one-shot. And, I love how you arrange your ideas. All ideas are neatly organised and planned.

Spelling/Grammer/Vocabulary: 9/10

I’m really impressed by the wide gamut of vocabulary you have used. The way you play with words was impressive too. Keep it up!

However, there are quite a few mistakes in your paragraphing of dialogues.
Okay, let’s get a bit technical with language. You tend to include more than one dialogue into a paragraph, which is a big No-No. Presentations of this ilk is confusing. Furthermore, you will only bore your readers. For example: “SeoEun ah!” YooChun’s delighted gush gashed in and chopped off JaeJoong’s sentence midway as he ran in and chortled blithely at her. “Have you been waiting for long? I’m sorry, we were chatting with some dancers outside! The three of them are still there and I thought I’d sneak back to meet you first!” His attention shifted to JaeJoong briefly and he prodded the older man on the shoulder. “Ya Hyung! Why did you walk off so soon?”

Sample: “SeoEun ah!” YooChun’s delighted gush gashed in and chopped off JaeJoong’s sentence midway as he ran in and chortled blithely at her, “Have you been waiting for long? I’m sorry, we were chatting with some dancers outside! The three of them are still there and I thought I’d sneak back to meet you first!”
His attention shifted to JaeJoong briefly and he prodded the older man on the shoulder. “Ya Hyung! Why did you walk off so soon?”

Another thing is, I would suggest to you to re-paragraph certain paragraphs to achieve an certain impact on your readers successfully, what the technique of repetition used is supposed to achieve. For example, “I’m sorry I could never be there again to tuck you in bed and kiss you goodnight. I’m sorry I could never be the one to taste your pancakes and hash browns again and tell you how marvellous they are. I’m sorry I could never decorate our Christmas tree with you again and waltz away in the carol of the bells. I’m sorry I could never huddle before the fireplace with you again when snow falls; I’m sorry I could never strum your favourite piece on the guitar for you again out in the sun. I’m sorry I could never look into your eyes again and tell you how much I love you, but please know I do, I always do, and always will.”

Sample:
I’m sorry I could never be there again to tuck you in bed and kiss you goodnight.
I’m sorry I could never be the one to taste your pancakes and hash browns again and tell you how marvellous they are.
I’m sorry I could never decorate our Christmas tree with you again and waltz away in the carol of the bells.
I’m sorry I could never huddle before the fireplace with you again when snow falls;
I’m sorry I could never strum your favourite piece on the guitar for you again out in the sun.
I’m sorry I could never look into your eyes again and tell you how much I love you, but please know I do, I always do, and always will.”

Flow Of Story: 9/10

The flow of the story for each one-shot is smooth and well-planned.

Writing Style: 4.5/5

Due to the fact that this fanfiction is a collection of one-shots, I can see that you attempt a different writing style for each one-shot. You did manage to create quite a unique writing style, unmistakably from the way you play with words.

Overall Enjoyment: 9/10

I have really enjoyed this fanfiction very, very much. For most of the one-shots, perplexed feelings that were aroused in me was indescribable. I could not really differentiate between melancholy or pity I felt for the protagonists. Beneath the words, I seemed to have felt a deeper feeling than I should have gained from the superficial meaning. Wonderful story.

Bonus marks: 5/5

2 marks for the efforts put in for each and every awesome one-shot.
1 mark for replying your readers.
2 marks for the immense enjoyment you have given me.

Total mark: 80/100

Additional comments: A

nother wonderful story! Thank you so much for your request. I have found myself another fanfiction to look forward to. =)
P.S. I’m very sorry for having taken such a long time to finish your request. Hope you will like your review. :)

Reviewed by(Lovie)@midnight-tree.co.nr

You Still Have Me

Title: You Still Have Me

Author: halky

URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/halky4/

Reviewed By: Sushi

Title: 9.5/10

‘You Still Have Me’ is a nice title for your story. It’s romantic and pin points the main idea of the story as well as the genre.

Poster and Background: 7/10

The colours you’ve chosen are very soft and light; nice and easy on the eyes. However, the pictures in the background are not washed out enough. Every time I reached the centre of the page, I get distracted by the pictures. Although the font is ‘just’ dark enough to read over it, it’s still hard because of Hebe’s dark and attention-grabbing hair.
I’m puzzled over the pictures in the poster. You’ve added in a flower and what seems to be a bridge? Strange, I don’t remember them being in the story. Although it makes the poster pretty, try to make it link to the story.

Foreword: 7/10

Your foreword is cute. Right away from the words they said and how they acted, I knew their age range, their relationship and a little bit of their personality. You didn’t need to list it out like a profile which is even better! However, it doesn’t seem to be a lead to the story as it is part of the story. Even though it introduces the characters, there is no introduction to the story. All you’ve given is that Arron likes Hebe and she is blind towards his feelings. Maybe say that Hebe usually gets played a lot and how Arron has to save her every time.

Cast Used: 3/5

Each character’s role is carried out quite consistently. Hebe is a girl who looks for any possibility of love that is thrown at her. They way you’ve written it, the time frame is probably one week every indent? This makes her sound like the ‘easy’ sort of girl who would agree to everything the guy asks of her. I didn’t think that this is the type of girl you’re trying to portray. You’re trying to make her seem like an innocent victim that’s been toyed around by love, right? The way she was so depressed every time they dumped her would have worked, but how simple it was for Arron to cheer her up makes me wonder if she was that depressed after all. Especially when she moved from one guy to the next so often as well, really shows how easily she can just forget the one she had previously been heart broken for.
Arron has a stubborn, distant and proud personality. He was too proud to express his love for Hebe and even commented Lee Wei as ‘lucky’ to be able to confess to her. I like his character better than Hebe’s. He is stronger willed and determined in his goal in making Hebe happy, rather than Hebe where her heart can be healed with just a cup of guan dong zhu.

Originality and Creativity: 4/15

I wouldn’t say that this is creative. It’s just the story of a guy rescuing his love every time she gets into trouble over and over and over. From the start I knew the ending and from the fourth indent I knew how the story was going to go. I wasn’t surprised or wowed when I reached the end. It was just a typical fairy tale ending.

Story and Plotting: 10/15
Your plotting was consistent throughout, with Hebe getting a new boyfriend and then getting comforted by Arron. It was like a cycle. Two things that really seemed out of the blue in your story were the pads and the kiss at the end. The pads were weird. I just laughed and thought what the heck? when I read that part. It really knocked the romantic feeling out the window. There are other ways to have Arron be read as a thoughtful guy and to stick him with something more, cooler? Magic tricks have always been thought of as a way to cheer up girls. Pulling out a rose from behind her ear is much more romantic than pads!
The tongue action at the end is highly inappropriate. Light hearted romance does not call for such a description. Describe how they felt instead if you’re looking for something to fill in the gap. Actually, that would have been much better. Describe clearly how happy Arron felt to have confessed and how shocked yet touched Hebe felt.

Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 5.5/10

The word ‘hardly’ is not an adverb for hard. It means, only just. You’ve used ‘hardly’ incorrectly for a lot of sentences so I didn’t think it was an accident.
There were some sentences that were poorly structured. One of the many that I picked up was:

Then she looked up at the disappearing figure, than more tears came out from her eyes
*When she looked up at the disappearing figure, more tears came out of her eyes

The use of than and then in the same sentence should be avoided. When there was a then in the previous sentence, try not to use it again in the following. Makes it look dodgy.

There were also sentences that Arron said that didn’t make sense. I assumed that it was because he was in a fit of rage to have rambled on about gibberish.

THAT FREAKING GUY IS SO LUCKY THAT HE WILL HURT YOU AGAIN! WHY DON’T YOU CHOOSE ME INSTEAD?

Why is he lucky to hurt her? And had he hurt her before? Like I said, Arron’s talking in gibberish.

Remember to edit your work. Read it out loud to see if it makes sense or not. It’s the little silly mistakes that cost you your whole meaning of the sentence.

Flow of Story: 9/10

Nothing seemed out of the blue. Everything was constant.

Writing Style: 3/5

I think, from what I’ve said about your creativity, if you put in a twist at the end it would be much better. Right now, you’ve written a plain basic story. For the finishing touches, it would be better to add a climax to the story, put in a twist, something that would make your story memorable.
Also, I don’t think you’ve gone into much depth with the emotional side. When dealing with romance, you’ve got to explore not only what their emotions are making them do (whether it is to strangle Calvin or crying), but explain what they’re feeling. What they’re thinking and what they desired.

Overall Enjoyment: 6/10

Pretty good story. Not bad. If you follow the recommendations I’ve stated, I surely hope that your story will be better in the future.

Bonus marks: 2/5

Two points for making your own layout.

Total mark: 66/100

Additional comments:

If you have any queries then tag me

Reviewed by Sushi@midnight-tree.co.nr

World’s Apart

Title: World’s Apart

Author: lil_tiger
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/lil_tiger2/ 
Reviewed By: Sushi

Title: 9.3/10

Your title is quite compatible with your story. Although it is usually used as a metaphor, you have decided against the main stream and used the meaning of it in a literal way. It isn’t a simple title as it holds many meanings and you managed to link it throughout the story. The only complaint I have is that it doesn’t capture my interest. It looks and sounds boring and doesn’t hold much appeal. Although the title does have relevance to the story, it would be better to make it more eye catching.  

Poster & Background: 3/10

Putting aside the use of graphics present in the poster, the current layout does not follow through with the fantasy genre of the fiction. From what I see, the poster only indicates romance, along with the quote that completely conflicts with the story. Love and hate? All I see is love, where is the hate? Where is the clash? Your quote also point towards romance, in which I think is the secondary genre of the story. Fantasy seems to override it and I see nearly no elements in the poster. Granted that you have managed to make it bright and glowing and seeing that it is quite out of the norm, so I’ll give some points for that.  

The background and the poster do not match. However you look at it, even with the black font on the poster, it clashes. Also, seeing as it is a fantasy fiction, the background is too plain. Add some fantasy elements in it. Maybe the red cloudy skies you have described in your story? The font was clear and readable.  

Foreword: 6/10

I like your short paragraph. It has some indications of it being a fantasy when you wrote, “Nothing is the same anymore.” What I didn’t like was how you wrote out paragraph after paragraph describing each character, saying what the liked or disliked. You don’t need to do that. You have already described each character in your story clearly enough for the reader to understand their personality. And long paragraphs like that can sometimes make the forewords seem over the top. Make it short, simple and to the point. By the way, is Hayley supposed to be Michelle?  

Cast Used: 2.9/5

Let’s look at Tavia. Referring back to the foreword in your character description, you said that she was a fashion fanatic? Seeing as she isn’t a main character in the story (so far), I wouldn’t think you’d go into much detail about her. But from what I’ve read on her character, nothing showed that she was a fashion fanatic as you have claimed her to be. You see, this is why you don’t explain each character in the foreword. This way you can change your mind about what they are like.  

Now onto Rachel. I still have no idea what her personality is like. Even after how many chapters, all I know is that she is the wise cunning one. There were times when she was a trickster, there were times when she was nasty, then she was reasonable then she was kind. Who is this person? There’s nothing distinct about her, her personality changes too much. Find one personality for her and stick by it.  

Originality & Creativity: 13/15

Considering that it is of a fantasy genre, of course it is very creative. Being in a coma and ending up in another world, you wouldn’t call that clichéd. However, the ending, as far as I know, is quite predictable. Charmaine and Raymond are going back to the “real” world and are going to end up together with some talk with their current partners. Because your story is yet to end, think of a twist that would make the reader go, WOW! Make sure that the twist makes sense as well of course.  

Story & Plotting: 12.5/15

I didn’t have a problem understanding your story. It was clear and precise. Except for when Charmaine’s mother suicided. One minute she was lecturing Charmaine, the next minute she was on the road. I think you rushed it a bit there, seeing as you didn’t even indicate that she left the room! Apart from that, I can’t find any flaws (that I remember).  

Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 6.5/10

Your sentence structure was a bit bad. Some didn’t make sense and others seemed to be put together with the use of ‘;’. Do not violate the use of these semicolons. You have overused them and it makes it hard to read your sentences. Instead of placing them, either separate them into different sentences or with commas.  

Another thing is your use of ‘………………’ What the heck is that? An ellipsis only has three dots. Why did you use so many for? Reduce the numbers!

Flow of Story: 9/10

Your story would have gone smoothly if you had elaborated on Charmaine’s mother’s death.  

Writing Style: 2.5/5

Your writing style is alright. I had no problems sitting back and reading it. The thing was that you should describe the scenery more and the movement of the fictional characters, especially Rachel because she seemed to not come from the ‘real’ world which evidently makes her more interesting. Paint a picture of that world for your readers to imagine it so that the fourth wall can be broken and see themselves in the story with your characters. It’s a hard thing to do but when writing fantastical stories, that’s what you’re trying to aim for.  

Overall Enjoyment: 3/10

Too tell you the truth, I didn’t enjoy it. The only thing that kept me going was my curiosity in seeing how you would write this fantasy fiction.  

Bonus marks: 0/5 

No bonus marks.  

Total mark: 67.7/100 

Additional comments: I am so sorry I took so long! I have my reasons!!  

Reviewed by Sushi@midnight-tree.co.nr- 

Family Crisis

Title: Family Crisis
Author: August
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/August
Reviewed By: v

Title: 4/10
The title clearly explains what the reader is in for upon clicking on the provided link. "Family Crisis" sounds very predictable, and without excitement. But nevertheless, your title is closely linked to your story.

Poster & Background: 7/10
I do like your poster. It blends very well with your background. I like the colour choice; the kind of blue many will not use. I see it as unique. The two guys at each end were on a street. Both seemed to be wondering aimlessly. I am not sure if it connects with your story. But at least, I like your graphics.

Foreword: 4/10
It does not provide a prologue of the story, neither a summary. It is hard to attract readers without either one of the above mentioned. You gave a list of character involved in your story. However, from the point of view of a reader, he or she will only be interested in the main casts. Since all your characters are from Big Bang, Wonder Girl, or are fictional characters, this sentence: "Other members from Big Bang and Wonder Girls may or may not be included in the story. I might also add a few more fictional characters along the way." is enough. By listing down a series of names, it distracts the reader from your main casts.

Cast Used: 3/5
Being unfamiliar with K-Pop celebrities, I remember the characters' personalities, and thus am able to differentiate them. I think you've done well so far. It's just a little pity because you haven't finished, and I can only rate according to those posted chapters.

Originality & Creativity: 7/15
I am sorry, but I know of a true account similar to your story. And the true account was really far more descriptive (when I was told the story).

Story & Plotting: 10/15
I feel that since you've titled it as "Family Crisis", it was supposed to affect your main female lead (SunYe) a lot, you should have thrown in more descriptions on her emotions. That would have made more impact on the reader (me) as he/she (I) read about how unfair life was for her when she was still at her dad's place (with the mean step-mother and annoying step-brother). I like your descriptions in the story, but I feel that you should also focus on SunYe's emotions as she goes through this family crisis.

Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 8/10
Your language is generally okay (:


Flow Of Story: 8/10
I think your story flows pretty well for now. The story didn't lose me halfway through. So well done on that!

Writing Style: 3/5
Because it's merely 5 chapters, it is hard to determine your writing style. But so far I think you are progressing pretty well (:

Overall Enjoyment: 5/10
Like I mentioned earlier, suppose because your story is too similar to a true story I've heard, so it sort of spoiled the story for me.

Bonus marks: 2/5
For replying to your readers individually.

Total mark: 61/100


Additional comments:
Don't worry about the results, this is after all only your FIRST attempt! I'm sure you can do better with practice the next time round! Good luck with the rest of this fan fiction and your future ones!

Reviewed by v @midnight-tree.co.nr