The Joint Of Hell And Heaven

Title: The Joint Of Hell And Heaven

Author: by Ji Yul

URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/Angel_Ji_Yul

Reviewed by: Lamer_


Title = 9.5/10

Interesting Title.. Very catchy yet unique in it’s own way.. It attract my attraction when I first saw it..

Poster & Background = 9/10

Lovely poster use.. It suit the theme of the story very much..

Foreword = 8.5/10

A much detail info about the story genre and the cast.. The story start on the foreword made me look forward to read on the story.. Good Job..

Cast = 4/5

Well.. I hardly read up about Korean artistes fanfic.. But nice casting.. I love how you shape up the character in the story..

Originality & Creativity = 13.5 /15

Interesting storyline.. Lovely flow of the story.. Nice job.. I love those sweet scene between the King of Hell and the King of Heaven.. The storyline is much it’s own style and unique in it’s own way..

Plot = 13.5/15

Great.. I love how the story flow till now.. It’s very unique in it’s own way.. Nice Job..

Language (Spelling & Grammar) = 9/10

Not bad.. Hardly found any.. Only some small ones.. But overall it’s good.. :)

Flow Of The Story: 7.5/10

The story flow was amazing.. I like how it’s written and I totally adore it.. But I tend to lost in some part when YunHo turns bad and etc.. But.. Everything is clear after some time.. Good Job.. :)

Writing Style: 4.5/5

I adore your writing style.. It’s uniquely yours way.. I like how you shape up each and every character of the story and some exciting parts..

Overall enjoyment = 8.5/10

I really did enjoy the story.. It’s lovely and nice.. Continue to update it.. :) Keep up the good job.. :)

Bonus Mark: 4/5

I can see your effort in writing good chapter out in the story.. Keep up the good work.. Continue to update it.. :)

Total: 91.5

Additional Comment: I really adore your story so much and hook on it.. :) Continue to update it.. Your story is really unique and lovely.. :) I am also VERY sorry about this very late review.. It was previously under another reviewer but she sort of went missing for action for a long time so i took over it and review it.. VERY SORRY.. I sincerely apologise for the delay..

Reviewed By Lamer_@Midnight-tree.co.nr